Yesterday I set out to make the improvements on my storyboard that I had thought of the previous day. I didn't change too much, as I seemed to get good feedback on the way the story flowed and how it was structured. I did however add in the long shots and different angles that I was debating about and I think this massively improved the story. It just made it more interesting to look at by offering a wider range of angles. I also think that some of the scenes will 'work better' in the new ways I have sketched them out in.
Above are just two of the frames I redesigned/improved, and apologies for them being the worst quality photographs in the world.
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